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WOOOOOOOOOOO! ANOTHER CHAPTER COMPLETE!!
Thank you all for sticking around so long! We’re really getting moving now! So exciting!
Sorry about the massive delay! I’ve been sick for the last few days sooooo… Mostly been laying on the couch and playing Dragon Age between coughing and sneezing and general sickiness. XP
Omg words.
I’m gonna be out of town over the weekend so the next few updates will be silly filler. Give myself a break and a chance to do some writing!! NOW OFF TO BED I GO!!








ERMEHGERD TANNA YOU SO ROLANY!
That all sounds veeeery ominous!
You should point out it was Dragon Age: Origins and not that crappy Dragon Age 2
CITEH ELF!
HAVE GOOD SLEEPY SLEEPS!
Where…Where does that Rolan need to be…. Oh riggghttt…. HERE WITH ME!
Evil is afoot!
I think temple was used for blood sacrifices, and Luero is in the know.
Oh no Roland is secerly the Batelf and off to the bats caves for him to bat suite up and ride in on (in) his bat horse mobile..
Or he is off to meet Q orM and get his spy number…
Roland seems… remarkably calm.
End of another chapter it is
Serious Rolan… Uhhh…
Hmm… Tanna dashing off… who does this remind me of in the RP… she’s blonde… Another parallel XD
YAY SILLY FILLERS!!!!!!!! Here, have a cookie for getting better.
And some tea, of course.
EVERYONE IS INVITED TO THE TEA PARTY!!!!!!
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O_O
Yay! Tea party! I bring virtual brownies for all to share!
Hmmm… there’s something about talk of tea that gives me funny accents
Yay, virtual brownies!!!!!!!!
The accents are the best part
*munches on a virtual brownie, brushes off the crumbs and sips some tea* … I’m always up for a tea party with accents, virtual or otherwise! Hey Naarie what a great (and suspenseful) end to Chapter 5! Congratulations on concluding another great run.
Now rest up and get full energy back! Looking forward to the “filler” which is always pricelessly adorable.
Ooh, a name I don’t recognize! First time commenter perhaps?
…
DOGPILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(We do this a lot…)
*dives to join dogpile* Welcome to the comic!
Aaaaaaaaaaa! Thank you. :] I actually have commented… once!… before! Still clearly guilty of lurking though. However if you promise me tea and virtual biscuits I’ll make sure I comment every time! :p
Well of course! The tea and virtual biscuits are so guaranteed we don’t even have to mention them!
I ‘member you!!!!!
*Flopsonthedogpile*
Oooh … and now for something completely different.
How does Luero’s hair do that? In panel 2 I mean?
At around neck level, it’s growing at an angle that couldn’t possibly be from his head. He’s got hair growing out of his hair! O_o
Hairception.
The strands closer to the front are bangs, he just has them pulled back. Just like in the other panels.
There should be additional hair above those pulled-back bangs though, since there’s hair below them that’s at that angle from so far back.
As it is, with hair growing out from the end of the bangs below them, but not above, he’s either got hair that’s bending at a very unnatural angle inside his bangs, or he’s got hair growing from inside his hair.
In the average panel Luero’s hair grows from the direction of his head, which is what hair does. In that one it’s not growing from his head, which is kind-of abnormal.
She’s got creative freedom. Even if it doesn’t look right. Seriously though, who would point that out? Everyone makes mistakes, okay.
Certainly everyone makes mistakes, and pointing them out helps the artist spot them. I prefer to have people catch odd anatomy and whatnot when I draw, and I try to do the same for other artists. Most that I know prefer honest criticism to blind praise.
It’s because it’s being flipped backwards against it’s normal flow, being held there by the headband. My hair does that too when I wear headbands.
I don’t think we’re talking about the same bit of hair. ^_^’
Aaaaha. I think I see what you’re talking about now. I had to scroll up and down between the panel and your description and stare at it for a while, but yes. The hair growing under the flipped back part could use some angle correction so it doesn’t look like it’s growing out of the rest of the hair. I never would have spotted that on my own though…. You have super observational skills.
YAY!!! FILLER!!
(pleasebelokiandluero,pleasebelokiandluero) SILLY FILLER!!!
I Hate being sick, so, *pats* get to feeling better!
And another great, if extremely ominous, page. Thanks you guys!
Run TANNA RUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
Serious Rolan is ominous… O_O
Yay, in-between-chapters filler!
Get better soon, Naarie!! Illnesses are icky and un-fun (which IS a word), and yet you still bring us an amazing page. Tanna’s expression is so accurate-I think that’s what I look like half the time
I can totally see Luero doing that
Random note, but when I first glanced at the new page, I though panel 3 was something like “And you, master high elf, what are your intentions towards Tanna?”
Forgetful Tanna is cute Tanna
look forward to more~
This is totally awesome
and I’ll keep an eye on Lu for you whilst you’re sick
Please tell me “keeping an eye on him” involves tying him up in your basement
…I’m weird honey but I am not that weird no will I ever be.
… where is Kat and what have you done with her?
I know right?
This is the life model of Kat. Do feel free to leave a message
I didn’t mean in a bdsm way I meant like misery kinda way
Still not that weird…Also I don’t have a basement so he’s actually outside playing with Smudge right now….Needless to say it’s hilarious (Smudge is my dog.)
*tiny fangirl squee* Mental mage cuteness overload. /dies
Oh dear….I killed someone….
Ah well…Lu put her down! Put my dog down!
This is gonna be fun….
Why do I suddenly have a mental image of a chibi version of Luero? *shudders*
…..That would be beyond adorable.
See, this is a good thing. you worked on this page even though you probably need to rest. I’m glad you’re getting that much needed rest, but pleased your love for your work and your readers shows. This is a good page because it re-focuses us on Tanna’s personal objective and mission. There’s a sense of urgency. And it leaves us still wondering about those mysterious circumstances we just saw and sheds a a new question into Rolan’s story: Where’s our High Elf Derpy off to? We’ll find out in the next chapter. This is why this sort of scenario is known as a “cliff-hanger climax!” Very well done. Oh. And for the record, I love the perspective in the last panel. The over-the-shoulder shot. An overall good way to end this chapter on a climax and leave us wanting more.
Random complete bibliographic overview of the page, as written by Kevin.
Because why the hell not.
Did anyone else notice that Luero called Rolan “Master” High elf? …. Methinks Rolan’s layers are being slowly unwrapped. Like an onion.
He’s called him that before, and it’s just a respectful term for a younger person. When I was in High School I went on a cruise and they had everyone’s names listed on the cabins, both me and my brother were listed as Master while my father was listed as Mister.
Careful Mage, your rich-boyness is showing.
…..
Thats… Very nice.
I haven’t the faintest of what you are talking about sir!
Fixes monocle
Eeeeek! Trials time! Tanna had better get her tush into gear if she wants to make it in time.
Masters High Elf and Luero. Sounds like a law firm or something.
That’s a very calculating look going on there. Something tells me that our little derpy Drethalrolan isn’t as naieve and unknowing as we think.
*gives you a cookie for actually remembering Rolan’s full name*
*gives you cake for the same reason*
*happily takes offered baked goods* It’s not that hard to remember!
Katie, kaite, dear katie…steals cake….we have been saying that for a long time Roland is deeper than he looks..
We’ve all known that he’s a deeper, more complex character than he seems for a while now, but something about his mannerisms in this page drive that home. Also, my cake. *takes back*
Apparently is it for everyone in the comic. I’m still waiting for Tanna to accidentally blurt out “Derpalrolan” at some point…
Derpalrolan. Oh god. *dies laughing* The temptation to change my username to that is ridiculously intense right now.
He’s probably gonna do this now that’s I’ve mentioned it, but what f Archmage changed all the usernames to that? That would be hilarious… we would only be able to tell by the pictures XD
*if
avatars instead of pictures… I’m such a fail…
Mother of god. April Fools prank for next year. IT WOULD BE LEGENDARY! *cackles* You’re not a fail, you just had a moment of forgetfulness. It happens :3
Archmage wouldn’t even have to do it. We could all arrange to change our names to that and any new people would be all WTF?!
IT’S GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really cause I think it would look like Rolan took over the site and decided to talk to himself
ooo, like the suspense here. where does he have to go? >.> I need to know!
*Has no idea what’s going on*
*Munches popcorn and watches*
Welcome to my world. *makes some iced tea and takes a sip*
I hope you don’t mind my saying, but Luero’s torso looks a bit odd in the first panel.
It’s the armor if it’s too tight you can’t move, or breathe for that matter, however on the other side if it’s too loose it looks like you’re wearing a leather poncho.
hmmm, dragon age you say? yeah all is forgiven, now when you’re done with that one you need to try dragon’s dogma, it has it’s flaws but I’ve never felt more baddass slaying a dragon than in that game…
Did you play KotOR as a Jedi or sith?